Remember a tiny bird who decided to look for her LOVE in "ThE InCoMpLeTe SoNg"?
Dear readers, if a recap is needed, click on the title to read my first poem - The Incomplete Song Link . So, what did ever happen to that lovely soul?? Here is the next poem that brings out her journey as she flies around looking for a Love so powerful that it could conquer almost anything in the world.
Dear readers, if a recap is needed, click on the title to read my first poem - The Incomplete Song Link . So, what did ever happen to that lovely soul?? Here is the next poem that brings out her journey as she flies around looking for a Love so powerful that it could conquer almost anything in the world.
!!ThE mIsSiNg VoIcE!!
Up in the glossiest of night skies
Flies a feathered girl with bated breath,
She was just a tiny dot to the eyes
Yet, the sheer grit within her did showeth,
It would and did make one marvel awhile
As to what the dear soul was beseeching,
Thus, we backtrack along lines sung erstwhile
To know that, for an answer, she's searching,
The question our girl faces,
Will she reach her so-called destiny??
Will "ThE MiSsInG VoIcE" sing back?
Will the voice make her feel sunshiny??
Or Will she keep flying forever in black?
To sing with rapture and fly with passion
And lead a life being deliriously happy
She needed love as vast as the ocean
Again a professional writing my friend..!!:) Its really very expressive..:):) THe final stanza are like the decision to take in our life journey..:):) "Like this tiny nightingale are all of us inside
ReplyDeleteA part of us we keep locked in abysmal hiding" My fav one..:)
Thanx Nani :).. But I know it's bit long..
DeleteThough it's long, it has a flow and so it's nice and interesting to read..;):)
DeleteAlrit then :)..
Deletenice work..... feel gud to read........
ReplyDeleteThanx a lot Divya :)..
DeleteI took the meaning of courage, determination, and consistency from the lines of your poem that every girl should possess to set a beautiful life to attain a so called destiny. It’s a hidden voice, the nightingale always in us, we need to harness it and to sync with that beautiful voice.
ReplyDeleteIf there was a contest that who will become the next “Nightingale of India“, I would have voted for you definitely.